Now They're Gone

by BrokenMisery   Aug 5, 2005


Watching fire burn silhouettes alight
Destruction causing chaos in withering delight
Burning to charcoal as a city stands bare
Forgotten in a world with no one to care

Bodies along the streets, dumped and dead
Twisted and broken with memories unsaid
Those that stand here in bitterness alive
Cry their tears upon the souls that died

In this game of war your brothers took part
As bombs rained down, tearing cities apart
Into the war these soldiers were born
Now their names recorded, the boys are gone...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Awsome! you're skill is great! i love how you explain this, it reminds me of the Black Plaugue, it's exactly like it almost. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    omg.. that was so sad.. i liked the emotion.. and ur last two lines just summed it up for me..
    keep goin
    nonz

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Heya,
    I liked this because it shows how bad war is and how many people suver(sp?)
    the flow was pretty good and it was easy to read while enjoying it at the same time.

    much love x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    omg that was awsum kt!
    talk 2 ya soon when im allowed 2 cum back 2 skool!
    luv amy
    ps - ok i'll think about a luv poem and i'll post it when its dun

  • 18 years ago

    by Mrs Reynolds- far from fixed

    meaningfull poem, i liked reading it, it has lots of meaning and is really effective due to wonderful wording.

    well done
    xxxxxxxxx

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