Forgotten... treachery.. I love how you repeat phrases or words, and the way they are placed into the poem makes them stick into our heads.
Very nice. I loved it, like usual. "Whisper those hollow tunes you used to play", this is utterly beautiful!
I was going to say, I hadn't seen your posts or poems for a while. Nice to know you're still writing.
scary...stunning...brilliant....its like talking to a mirror....a dusty mirror that reflects just images of a forgotten past and the mirage of the future while the present is lost somewhere in the intricate details of time..