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  • 12 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Always very emotional. Very nice.
    -A

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    I've utterly missed your word craft Alias.
    Always have you been able to appropriate your imagery and vivid impressions masterfully.

    This poem sang with such contempt as to make it consequentially tangible, alluding quite effectively to your stoking contemplations.

    It's good to have you back Pink.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Forgotten... treachery.. I love how you repeat phrases or words, and the way they are placed into the poem makes them stick into our heads.
    Very nice. I loved it, like usual. "Whisper those hollow tunes you used to play", this is utterly beautiful!
    I was going to say, I hadn't seen your posts or poems for a while. Nice to know you're still writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Eraklis

    Some really great words. Sad to see you havn't written in a while you have alot of talent.
    Look forward to reading more.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Stunning. 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    Ok...
    scary...stunning...brilliant....its like talking to a mirror....a dusty mirror that reflects just images of a forgotten past and the mirage of the future while the present is lost somewhere in the intricate details of time..

  • 11 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    GAW DROPPIN', HEART POUNDIN', CHIKEN LICKEN', uhhmm I mean cool, havent talked to you in awhile.. :)