My Teddy Bear Love Story : Pt. 2

by Renee   Aug 7, 2005


If I remember correctly,
standing above my lifeless love
I heard that teddy bear,
sing that song we both sung.

As the blood dripped from your pale face,
such a beautiful contrast,
with our fingers gently laced,
It was then I knew what we had.

It was a love full of passion,
with your eyes filled with hate.
And if I could have read between those lines,
I wouldn't have been a second to late.

And as I sang those sad tears
That teddy bear, with its cold stares,
whispered in my ear,
whispered that dance that we shared.

-*-Ok, I'm very sorry for the long delay between parts. I've had it written for two and a half weeks but I never got to put it up. The third one will be up shortly. I've already written it. Thanks a bunch to all of those who commented on my last one. love you all!!-*-

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Nicely done M'dear.

    "I wouldn't have been a second to late."

    I think you meant "too". =)

    My favourite lines are:

    "It was a love full of passion,
    with your eyes filled with hate.
    And if I could have read between those lines,
    I wouldn't have been a second to late."

    Especially the two lines you started out with.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    That was very well written :)
    Again loved the flow and like the last one i loved the idea:)

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    awsome write I havent read anything of yours and I can't wait to
    love always
    Natalie

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    really good, excellent details! check out sum of mine plz!