The title sounded sad and beautiful, but the actual poem was sad and dark. But it was REALLY sad.
I'm sorry if I don't get up to reading your explicit poetry, besides being underage I don't enjoy it very much.

Dear elizebeth, this is my poetry morbid as all hell, i write what i feel, its not for everyone, so if you dont enjoy it, dont read it, problem solved, but thanks for the comment, VERY sad was what i was going for, and beautiful was the last feeling pumping through my vains...