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by â€ JustAriâ€ Aug 8, 2005
Sleep totters away
Like an unattended child
Why must I play Mom?
*I wrote this last night when i couldn't sleep...i was too anxious about going to school and i haven't slept since 4:00 this morning...and it's 8:07 pm here...ha ha ha.
Â© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005
Of Japanese origin, a poem with a 5-7-5 syllabic count. Three Lines. Senryu usually have references to human nature, unlike haiku.
love it! keep it up.
i hate having troubles sleeping. i have such a hard time fallin asleep the day before school too, i hate it! but when i have troubles sleeping i normally write poems so i guess it's not to bad! wonderful job hun!
~PLP~ lil slam~