Comments : Let Me Be

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Short but sweet...I like it too. See...different can be good ;)

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I really like this! Thanks for commenting on my poems! I appreciate it! Great job on this!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristi Hurt

    Thats a GREAT poem!!!!! It is really really really good written and i like reading your stuff! you are a great writer and im glad u do write!

  • 12 years ago

    by *~*Gina*~*

    That such a sweet poem, very touching.
    ~Smile Always~
    Gina

  • 12 years ago

    by L0KA

    That was such a sweet poem. I liked how you wrote it and the outline of it. Very nice. Great job on this. You are very talented. Keep up the great work. Take care. Peace. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nikki

    this is so good i love it I can feel the meaning keep it up 5/5 much luv

    ~Nikki~

  • 12 years ago

    by Patrik

    I liked it until "Let me be your knife", that paragraph and the next one was so so, then it got good again. Just didn't feel any flow during those two paragraphs.

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 12 years ago

    by xXlostXx

    hey thats heaps sweet, i love it!
    keep it up :D
    5/5
    - xXlostXx

  • Aw that's sweet, i really like it.
    Well Done.

    <3 Charli XxX

  • 12 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow i really liked that poem. I wrote one similar to that but i never posted it :P but i really liked the rhythm and the ending. Good job and keep it up.

    Could you check out my poem called do you want? please:)

    <3<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Lex

    Good poem make sure u check out mines!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hey, that was so sweet. I really liked it.
    see ya!

  • 12 years ago

    by Renee

    I love this poem, it says a lot of things that I would love to say to someone. The only thing that bugged me was all the repitition. Maybe you could tone it down a bit? Just a suggestion :-) But I love the concept.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 12 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really liked this poem. The structure was very nice. I loved the second and third stanzas the most. it was very very well written, good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was great the idea was well developed and i loved thed repitition pattern that used it was very clever and made the poem flow very well good job

  • 11 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I liked it but the contrast didnt make sense. great rhythm though.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey, I absolutely love this one... You have great talent. Thanks for the comments and keep writing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Carmen

    That is so sad! i luved it

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    A strong message ang a great style that brought forth the best of your message. Unique and powerful!

  • 11 years ago

    by sayo

    Hey that was good i liked it thanxz for commenting my poem keep writing PEACE!