60 Seconds Till No One Saves The Young Girl

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Aug 9, 2005


1 minute left,
Till the clock strikes midnight,
When she gives up,
And drops from this fight.

45 seconds left,
Till her life and pain subsides,
And in this cruel world,
She no longer hides.

30 seconds left,
Till the black will over take,
And this little girl's smile,
Is no longer fake.

15 seconds left,
Till that dark birdie will sing,
And all the neighbors will wake,
From a sounding ring.

5 seconds left,
Till flying lead,
When a young girl,
Blows off her head.

0 seconds left,
Till all hope is doomed,
And into Satan's arms,
Another child soul consumed.

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  • 18 years ago

    by angie A

    I liked this poem!! it has really great ryhmes!! thanks for the comment!!

  • 18 years ago

    by afrodite

    Really creative. i like this one, you got a lot of talent chick, keep up the good work!x

  • 18 years ago

    by snowboots firefighter

    Wow that was unbeliveable! you rock!

    love snowboots.

  • 18 years ago

    by EllenoreShade

    This is so good.... I love it. Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Wow, the whole countdown thing was amazing, it kept my attention to the very end. Once again, I'm here to talk. You are so young, and so gifted with your ability to write!