That was really good it almost brought a tear to my eye.

Wow agan another sad and deep poem

Jacs
xxx

A deep and melanchloy poem. Very powerful. Thanks for sharing with us. Read some of mine if you want.

I think that would be one of the worst things in the world. To have your child die before you. You have real talent sweetie!!! Keep the poems coming. I have added a few new ones if you want to check them out.
~neens~

God works in mysterios ways -- not much else to say. Such a sad and emotional piece - for many feel such pain just peeking into the lives of those who face these tragedies. Another excellent write...I've fallen in love with your writing...hope all my comments aren't bothering you lol :)

Great job!!!

Ps:plz check out my poems and plz make me one of ur favorites ive allready got u

LOVE
Micky