My Love I'll Give You Everything (Triolet)

by Simon Hayes   Aug 11, 2005


My love I'll give you everything
The sun the moon and all the stars
The hummingbirds will gladly sing
My love I'll give you everything
A sunset fading in the spring
A quartet of Spanish guitars
My love I'll give you everything
The sun the moon and all the stars

© Simon Hayes 11/08/05

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Short, yet powerfull.
    Really like this one.
    Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    I really liked this poem, It's short but really good! I loved it. 5/5 for me. Luvs, DeadGirl

  • 17 years ago

    by Reborn Rival

    Good intentions! Love the warmth from this piece! 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by endless tears

    Short and sweet. you got all the true feelings of love in this write!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This is lovely......I looked you up here because I read your comment on the Romeo&Juliet thread, and I just want to tell you this.....29 years ago, come October,
    a man walked by me at work..As he whisked by, I caught a glimpse of his...profile..hair..walk...everything really...at that instant I gasped for air in recognition of Love.....(of course, there's a longer 'story' but).....We are, in fact, still together.....still living in that Love.....from a first sighting to a real Life.....to these certainties:.....that Love at first sight can...and does...happen......that Soul-mates do indeed manifest...and, that Karma is The Thread Of All Threads!
    Have a wonderful Life...

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