My Teddy Bear Love Story : Pt 3

by Renee   Aug 11, 2005


I danced across that floor,
with the teddy bear in my arms.
The tears streamed more and more,
and I scream from the bottom of my heart.

His vision filled my eyes,
and he took my hand once more.
I would soon realize,
what all of this was for.

I remember what he told me,
whispered sweetly in my ear,
with that angelic voice, he screams
"I will never leave you, my dear."

I know now, what I must do.
The teddy bear knows it, too.
I silence my screams
in its fluffy dreams.
and my name is carved in that teddy bear,
a heart forms around me and you.

-*-ok, I think thats the last for this series. I know the ends a little choppy. sorry if its not as well written as the last two.-*-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    Im glad you decided to write the second and third one, your really talented. ~ash

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Is written just as well renee...nice poem
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I like the whole poem, but I think this part is a bit too forced=)

    "I silence my screams
    in its fluffy dreams."

    My favourite lines were:

    "I danced across that floor,
    with the teddy bear in my arms.
    The tears streamed more and more,
    and I scream from the bottom of my heart."

    I like the whole series. Very nicelt done, M'Lovely.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Choppy? I'll kicka yo as-s-a!! HAHAHA

    I loved it...what a way to end the mini series. I love the teddy bears....what the hell made you write of teddy bears? You're weird. What a lovely finish ......just beautiful m'dear....

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I enjoyed all the poems it all came together.
    i really loved this part

    "I know now, what I must do.
    The teddy bear knows it, too.
    I silence my screams
    in its fluffy dreams.
    and my name is carved in that teddy bear,
    a heart forms around me and you."

    that really got me, i loved it :)

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