:-) It's perfection put into words my dear. A lovely write. ^_^ I believe you're immensly talented, and this series you wrote was mind bogglingly great. :-). With this part, my favorite stanza would be:

"I remember what he told me,
whispered sweetly in my ear,
with that angelic voice, he screams
"I will never leave you, my dear.""

Why? I have no idea. It just appealed to me greatly and hit the spot, for me at least. :-). Do take care my love, I'm here always and forever for you. <3
Love you-xxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

ps. YAY! First to comment =D!

Great poem, I liked all the "teddy poems" alot:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

I enjoyed all the poems it all came together.
i really loved this part

"I know now, what I must do.
The teddy bear knows it, too.
I silence my screams
in its fluffy dreams.
and my name is carved in that teddy bear,
a heart forms around me and you."

that really got me, i loved it :)

Choppy? I'll kicka yo as-s-a!! HAHAHA

I loved it...what a way to end the mini series. I love the teddy bears....what the hell made you write of teddy bears? You're weird. What a lovely finish ......just beautiful m'dear....

I like the whole poem, but I think this part is a bit too forced=)

"I silence my screams
in its fluffy dreams."

My favourite lines were:

"I danced across that floor,
with the teddy bear in my arms.
The tears streamed more and more,
and I scream from the bottom of my heart."

I like the whole series. Very nicelt done, M'Lovely.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Is written just as well renee...nice poem
5/5

Im glad you decided to write the second and third one, your really talented. ~ash