Great poem! That dream must have been awsome!lol!Keep up the good work!
Brittney
aka**mysterio~lover**

Aww, this poem is really sweet! It's like every girl's dream. Great job and keep writing!

~dandy~

Damn for your first poem it is very beautiful don't stop writing and keep up the good work also is this a fiction poem or is it real?

Ah...the perfect dream! And poem! Nicely done...5.
~Never Give Up

love it. keep submitting!

oh wow!
your really good...I guess its suppose to be happy right?..But it made me almost cried....Seriousely!..you did an awesome job..and your first poem on here only...very awesome^^

wow this poem is soooo cute

OK...WOW!! That poem was definitely one of the best i've ever read. It moved me so much and i just made my heart skip beats. It's brilliant. You should be very proud. It has...no flaws.

i loved it. it reminds me of me and my boyfriend. that was great keep writing

Wow Brooke .. this poem had me captivated with the first syllable of the title hehee .. i really enjoyed it .. really .. infact .. this poem has inspired me to write my own .. i've never really written nething to sensual .. so if u wud do me a favour and check the new poem i write .. dont worry i'll give u ur props . .hehe arite .. thanks again for checkin me out .. umm .. keep writing beautiful poetry .. inspiring yung kids like me to be better .. :D:D =) bye

da** that was relli good!

hey. that was really good. i loved it. keep it up. you write really well. 5/5

kelsey
xoxoxo

that was really sweet!!! good detail!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

woah...that was captivating......i;ve had dreams like that lately...well that was a great poem. amazing job im really glad i read it :o) [[5]]

Awwww!!! Thats sweet!! I love it! Keep up the good work! Once again I loved it!
Love always- Kelsey

great poem keep writting for a first timer comment on some of mine and tell me whatcha think honest is the best poilcy

Beautiful poem. Is it really your first??? Wow... Glorious setting. Anyway, keep it up -- you're doing a great job. I hope to read more of your work.
-Kate

That is good!!! Was that really your dream? I would Die for that to happen to me! Well GREAT job!

wow totally awesome poem. i'm so loving it =D. great job, i had the same dream!!! haha coolness.

<33 cheLLey

that was great you made me cry i guess its be cause i had a moment like that and i wish that that mommen would have lasted fore ever but time flew instead that was great keep writting you outta check out mine