Comments : Last Night I Had A Dream

  • 12 years ago

    by .:miss briTTney:.

    Great poem! That dream must have been awsome!lol!Keep up the good work!
    Brittney
    aka**mysterio~lover**

  • 12 years ago

    by dandy

    Aww, this poem is really sweet! It's like every girl's dream. Great job and keep writing!

    ~dandy~

  • 12 years ago

    by ceci Mathieu

    Damn for your first poem it is very beautiful don't stop writing and keep up the good work also is this a fiction poem or is it real?

  • 12 years ago

    by Mal

    Ah...the perfect dream! And poem! Nicely done...5.
    ~Never Give Up

  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

    love it. keep submitting!

  • 12 years ago

    by [X]dOrK7AgOny[X]

    oh wow!
    your really good...I guess its suppose to be happy right?..But it made me almost cried....Seriousely!..you did an awesome job..and your first poem on here only...very awesome^^

  • wow this poem is soooo cute

  • 12 years ago

    by Emotionless Riot

    OK...WOW!! That poem was definitely one of the best i've ever read. It moved me so much and i just made my heart skip beats. It's brilliant. You should be very proud. It has...no flaws.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kacey Lynne

    i loved it. it reminds me of me and my boyfriend. that was great keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Wow Brooke .. this poem had me captivated with the first syllable of the title hehee .. i really enjoyed it .. really .. infact .. this poem has inspired me to write my own .. i've never really written nething to sensual .. so if u wud do me a favour and check the new poem i write .. dont worry i'll give u ur props . .hehe arite .. thanks again for checkin me out .. umm .. keep writing beautiful poetry .. inspiring yung kids like me to be better .. :D:D =) bye

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany

    da** that was relli good!

  • 12 years ago

    by *~* kelsey

    hey. that was really good. i loved it. keep it up. you write really well. 5/5

    kelsey
    xoxoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by ~Britty~Nloveღ

    that was really sweet!!! good detail!!!!!
    ~lotta luv~
    ~britty~

  • 12 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    woah...that was captivating......i;ve had dreams like that lately...well that was a great poem. amazing job im really glad i read it :o) [[5]]

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Awwww!!! Thats sweet!! I love it! Keep up the good work! Once again I loved it!
    Love always- Kelsey

  • 12 years ago

    by Cristi

    great poem keep writting for a first timer comment on some of mine and tell me whatcha think honest is the best poilcy

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautiful poem. Is it really your first??? Wow... Glorious setting. Anyway, keep it up -- you're doing a great job. I hope to read more of your work.
    -Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by Kylie

    That is good!!! Was that really your dream? I would Die for that to happen to me! Well GREAT job!

  • 12 years ago

    by rachelle

    wow totally awesome poem. i'm so loving it =D. great job, i had the same dream!!! haha coolness.

    <33 cheLLey

  • 12 years ago

    by Eddie

    that was great you made me cry i guess its be cause i had a moment like that and i wish that that mommen would have lasted fore ever but time flew instead that was great keep writting you outta check out mine