this is such a very good poem! i can really relate to this poem! 5/5 if you get a chance plezz rate and comment on my poems! thank you!
leanna

aww i loved it sooo much! soo good 5/5

take care
much love
shannon

Very good poem, But it does need some work.

*TEAR*5/5 grl this poem was good it was so sweet i loved it keep doin your thing

This is good. reminds me of a sad love song...if you don't mind some advise though, the one stanza was hard to get at first cause it seemed broken apart somehow-
i know forever seems
a long time but
thats just what i feel
when i look into your eyes

maybe if you put it together-

i know that forever
seems a long time
but thats just what i feel
when i look into your eyes

you don't have to take my advice...just a thought lol. I really like this poem though I'll def. read more. and thanks so much for your comment!
Christina

I liked it - a little hard to understand in bits but it was in general a great poem. I think the point you were trying to get across worked. Keep it up :)

Oh i understand now - thought (you missed the h out so i read it as taught!) silly me :)

Good ending

Hey I like this poem a lot u really got dem words comin out of ya. keep up tha work mija.

Aw you write such touching poems i absolutly love it..though again the flow could use some work....member? long line and then short line dosnt work that well 5/5

Haha omg i accidently pressed complain to you comment but i DONT WANNA COMPLAIN god lol another good one 5/5 loved it

I loooooove this poem so much! amazing jobb =D!

*Heidi

I love the way you write things that are happy i wish i could write something remotly happy your wonderful
It came to a point where
my tears didn't matter
And it felt like blood
Slowly turned into water
that was such a cool stanza your great good job keep it up

Wish I could have seen this poem bought two months ago before me and my baby spilt up, due to him being a moron. Anyway good work. Love your poems.

Nice job love this poem i have fellt the same way about my ex boyfriend and well i hope things work out for you way more then they did with me.. nice job 5.5

Nice job, here's some things I changed to help the flow

hold on to me
like i hold on to you
promise that together
we can make it through

~We've been through a lot
but we both refused
To never let Go
though our answers were "no"

Keep it up!!!

Heart ache.. knowing it's over but not being able to admit it is .. definatly love it :)

That is the cutest poem i've read! that is soooooo cute.........keep up the good work... come check out some of mine......much love XotaeyannaXO

You are going to forgive me, but I must say the first stanza is a bit weak. Sorry!!!! Its just that the flow isnt that good there! But apart from that, I loved this poem girl! I wish I had a gf as you to write me poems like those!

That is beatiful 5/5