Comments : Like you

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    i'm always here for you and you should know that...i'm not better then you...at all...please don't feel like dieing...you were my first best friend..and you always will be...we've gone through so much together..we're blood sisters...i'm not prettiest or smartest..and you're not ugly or dumb...at all..and no not everyone loves me...and i don't have that many friends..don't be that way remember i love you and i'm always here for you!

    I Love You forever and always, Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Kevin

    Listen to Taylor, she is obviously your friend.

    This poem could be shaped into something pretty special...if that is you can detach yourself from the emotions of it...and try and look at it from the point of view of a piece of writing...take away all the dots, make it look more poem like..and less like a rant..

    And on a personal note..i know you are only 13, but you don't need to proclaim yourself alone and hated just to get attention...there are many people out there with problems far in excess of your own..and i know that doesn't dismiss how you feel....but get in perspective....everything will be just fine if you make an effort..strive to be happy.

    And good luck.

  • 17 years ago

    by tears fall to quick

    OMG! i love this poem.. i mean i can so relate to this... keep it up and sorry i havent posted any new ones! Ill post new one's ASAP!