True Story in 2001...reposted

by XnotaprettygirlX   Aug 16, 2005


Raping a girl on the oval. punching teachers what were you thinking.
your mum left you and your dad, ever since your soul's been sinking.
your dad was so nice, tried to keep your life fun.
you broke his heart when you ran away to see your mum.
so he called the cops to go and get you again.
he did, but you hate him so much, even though he loves you so.
you just want him dead a.s.a.p, why did ya mum have to go.
for weeks you've been planning something. no one knows what.
your dad asked you what it was, this made you even more cut.
now you've finally built up the courage to work your plan for real.
his lying on his bed asleep, not knowing what to do. this is so surreal.
you get your weapon, it's a spit from your own yard in the fire.
you start to stab him and call him a liar.
you smashed his body to so many small tiny bits.
you hide his body in a sewerage hole, only 20 cm wide, near the pits
tears rolling down your face
you run to your Friends place.
"help me! i just killed my dad!"
now you feel so bad.
"don't lie man, he can't be dead!" not looking to good.
covered with his blood you quietly said"look at me, now what do i do?"
so you rang the police and told them everything and how you did it.
his so smashed up, not even an autopsy know who it is.
your now in juvenile detention, you'll be there till your thirty-two Hun.
this is a true story bout a guy i know and what he did in 2001.

**hey umm my Friend Kacie did really do this and he is really messed up now..
can you please comment on this or vote please**

-angel-

p.s this is one of my older poems that I'm reposting

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stacey

    I think what you really need in your poems is structure, and correctness in your grammar.
    well written, feel sorry for the kid!

  • 18 years ago

    by megan

    Wowww thats like so sad

  • 18 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    =\ that's freaky... you wrote it well... but it's still feaky, sorry... good poem though...

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    oh no, thats so sad ...
    he must feel really really bad!!
    good work on your poem ...

    Love
    ~ SaM ~
    xox