this is so sad and powerful, definetly worth 5/5 loads of lv xxx keep writin and try 2 b strong

nicely written
ur really talented
lots of love
if could.. pls check out my poems
thanx and smile always

that was really good. maybe some work on some of the rymes? oh well, probably just me!

Is this a cutting/suicide poem? If it was it was beautifully rendered and disguised. The personal note to all these important people in your life was very poignant, and you managed to do it while you rhyme, good work.

Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox

This was really really well written and so sad!!
i loved the flow and you ould tell your heart was in it :|

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