Comments : I watch you as you're sleeping

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    This is a very powerful poem. The depth of love is so clear. Well written

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    This is great. thnx for my comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by jescelle

    Wow lyss........i know exatly how you feel! i see my bro going down too, or at least i feel it, cause im not allowed to see him or talk to him......... god im crying now....... anyway, awsome poem........ come check out mine and leave some comments!
    jescelle

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*WoW that was so good *tears* it was very pwoerful i loved it great work 5+*~ XoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Awesome and emotional poem. Keep it up