A Lonely Journey

by Darien   Aug 17, 2005


A Lonely Journey

The sunsets on this lonely town,
and the darkness creeps in.
The streets are empty tonight,
as the lights slowly go dim.

A boy sitting on his bed alone,
stares up at the stars above.
He is planning to leave town,
to find his one true love.

His bags are packed and ready,
his room he gives one last look.
A note on the fridge for his parents,
In place of a picture he took.

He leaves his home crying softly,
this journey has just begun.
On his way into the real world,
to find his special someone.

The darkness swallows him whole,
but he makes his way through,
just waiting for any chance,
to tell a girl, 'I love you'.

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  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Good emotion

  • 17 years ago

    by We Miss You Shannon

    Awww..
    ~shanny~

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    An amazing j0b darl 0n all ur w0rk. beautifully written. such a sweet write. heartfelt beautifully w0rded. keep it up
    i cann0t wait t0 red new w0rk! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Omg that is so sweet! i love guys that write poetry! there all so good! and te ones that do are the sweet ones! so im assuming you are one of the sweet ones! I love all your work! iv read every poem of yours! and there all fantastic!! your sooo good!
    Love Paige!
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxoxo
    please look and comment on some of my poems! like you my poems are about real experiences ive had to encounter through my life! you might not like them! but then maybe you might! i dunno! so please check them out and let me know for sure!
    Love ya xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Short but very expressive... life sucks?
    anyways.. i took your advice and wrote another poem not about anything sad or love??
    anyways.. nince poem :) loved it

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