Wow that poem had such an effect on me like i wish teachers were like that to me is that true story? because if i is i will feel so sad like how can a father do that to his duaghter its disgusting and just not human!! i think everyone should read this poem it was really good

I can totally relate to this poem, but i think she should try to look at the positive, i mean i was really fat and i lost so much weight from running away from my dad. If it wasnt for that i would stil be a porker.

Omg that was wow is this a true story? oh wow thats some stuff i like it hough

That's a very emotional poem.. ='|

Your poem was very good

:cry : ( sad im crying i luv ur poetry

I want to know if this true it made me cry so hard for that child and teacher

Holy crap!! THIS POEM MADE MY JAW DROP TO THE GROUND!! Awesome job, but so sad!:'(

Ana*

Wow! that was an amazing poem! it was woderfully written and i cant wait to read more! keep it up!

Samey

OMG!!! THIS POEM GAVE ME SHIVERS.I ALMOST STARTED TO CRY.THIS POEM IS GREAT.I LOVE IT,KEEP WRITING.5/5

I think it was good... but didnt seem to be right... Just my opinion... but keep it up...x

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AMAZING!!!

Wow omg it sad but amazing i dnt usual like long ppoems but this is such a seriously good one.Well done gReat emoton

Do you know what? a teacher did the same thing for me, clearly im not dead but she finally asked me why i was how i was and i showed her. i stayed with her untill i was safe and healed. i love this lady as if she is my second mother, she saved my life. Your poem is fantastic and its a credit to you. It really touched me and its full of emotion, if you could could you maybe mesage me with why you wrote this poem, like if its true or who its about...im really interested!
cheers from sarah

Wow,this is really touching. I've got tears in my eyes. Well done.
I hope this isn't true.

This poem is really good. it made me really sad. well keep up the good work and please read mine. 5/5

Bless ya that was so good well done on writing such a powerful poem, keep up the great work hun

Linds xXx

Wow.
he pulled out a gun aimed it a the girl
and he quickly ended
what had been the teachers world- my fave.

lv A x

That's pretty good reminds me of a certain case that happened when i grew up but uhhhhhh give me a holla when ya get this...and check out mine peace

I loved that poem.u are a real poet.the poem was touching to i almost teared.