Wow yer really good I love yer poems keep up the good work.

That's a pretty cool poem.
I'm not into slang, but this was nice :)

Well done! I love it, especially the ending, I'm glad you put that in there. I'm from The Unrequited Poets club, btw, and I read your post...this describes what happened perfectly. Sorry it had to happen to write the poem though.

xxx

I love your poems as well... they are awsome and so straight from the heart like mine.... yes i do sing..... if you would like to im me feel free.... im at msn - destroyedhopes@hotmail.com... or aim - destr0yedh0pes

That M'Dear, was a wonderful read. Sometimes it feels as though you're focusing the rhyme in, but it's still a beautiful pice of Art.

"If my heart was a book
Then you’ve skipped to the end"

I heart that line.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I loved this message your absolutly going on my favorites. your amazing. it flows soooo well and you use great words!!!!!!!!!!!

My heart was in battlefield,
Taken by war.

that was my favorite part it just sounded nice and it was smart of you to think of

the rhyme scheme and form you used was weird but i dont think it had any effect on the quality of this piece great job
5/5

Yes, the flow was nice, and the feeling was very good. Great job!

Good Writing!
beth

Love the speed of this one, flows wonderfully. Your ending lines are consistently powerful.

Gr8 poem again! thnx 4 the comment. yea that as 1 of my older n less good poems. thnx 4 takin the time 2 reed mine! i luv ur work. u got sum skills!
~*Who Cares?*~

5/5
Good poem.
And hey whats wrong with my picture =(
love
JP

Damn you are soooo frick'n talented,,,,this poem touched me! keep it up lvoe . LISSA xox

Some Sentences Were Too Long, And Made The Poem Seem a Bit Off, Yet It Was Brilliantly Put For The Most Part, The Format Was Better Than The Other, Yet I Feel Like You've Picked The Wrong Category For This Poem xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

You threw me in an emotional state now with the truths written behind these lines. The situation you mentioned occur so frequently in lives that many can relate to, but few truly learn. The last 3 lines kind of sum up the whole poem, nice work there. Wonderful display of emotions, I feel it. Thanks for sharing. =)