I really enjoyed this. I like the whole idea that you can't be with that person because they are dreaming and they are lost in their dreamworld, while you are here in reality wishing you were in their dreams. Nicely said.

Take Care,
Renee

Yeah, right...people you want to be with never come...maybe we should wait til we give it up...

But isnt that the whole point in love?
never giving up...well i dont know it was just a thought
well done hun
nice work
welcome to my fav
take care
kirsty xxxx

Hey i just want to say i love your poem too bits. i dont quite no why but its just so free, i dont no what i mean by that.
mexx