Comments : Before you Died

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, loss of life to a person
    close or to a friend is always sad.

    “Can’t you retrace your steps and
    come sit with me?”
    This stanza is a great write in its self
    as is the whole read indeed.
    Excellent poem, write on.

  • 18 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    Im not great on comments but im guessing that it is true as there is things in there you probably carnt make up sweet poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    This is a beautiful write, full of understanding at the deprivation the reader can share with you, when someone so close has moved on.. Very well done again. xx