Comments : Place a clock on my chest

  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    That was very good i give you a 5/5... amazing job....

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    This one was reli gud too.. i lykd the new topic and the words u chose and the imagery and how u pictures that day gr8 goin
    keep it ups
    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    AMAZING. a bit scary...gives me feeling of emptiness, as if the echoing sound of the clock was the only thing inside, and the only thing holiding the bodu together...anyway...*wakes out of trance* its fantastic, i love the form, and the way it gets shorter, and at the end, the words really do just fade away...it's so good it's scary. I LOVE IT.
    ~madfry~

  • 18 years ago

    by HeavenzEyez

    Please give me some tips of how you writie your poems so good, i'm forever writing poems but none of them i have written are as good as any of yours.

    xx-Heavenzeyez-xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ||The...Nameless||

    Wow this is such an iteresting poem.... i love how it still alot to the imagination..... I love how it flows.. and the structure of it..
    WELL DONE.......

    Thank you so much for your comment on my poem..........

    hope to read more of your poems bye

  • 18 years ago

    by melissa

    Wow great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    Wow! thats very imaginative! i never would related to two things! its great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    I think this is a great poem my little turnip! It's really original and clever. I especially love the last verse, really really really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Such an orginal subject! Well the death part isn't, but the whole clock ticking away thing is GREAT! It's sad but so simple and beautiful.....