That was sooo cute...5/5 i hope i have that one day... if you get a chance please check out my poems.. thankss!!

Wow.. great poem, 5/5

Wow that is such a great poem.. i loved it. and i can so relate to that b/c my boyfriends name is derik too! best of luck to u w// urs! :)

This Was Really Good! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I use to feel that way to until my perfect guy became a fraud. But I pray for you that your perfect guy is different and not like all the other guys in this world.

Hey!! omg ur poem is awesome that is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend! he is the best thing that ever happend to me....i can see u can relate to other ppl keep writing! *Ashlynn*

WOW...that is an amazing beautiful perfect poem keep it up! 5/5!!

That\'s obviously not love. I think that you are a sexed up teenager with no hope for the future, but to fall pregnant to some dropkick boyfriend who you will then be forced to marry but he will have many affairs with horrible girls and you will suffer forever in silence. And your child will never have a real father figure and you will never find true love. Lust is bad. do not succunb to its forces.

Short bbut nice, ilike it a lot ^^

I loved it. its like you know exactly how i feel about my boyfriend i just cant put it into words and you can. i have to tell you again i love it

This is a really good poem. its something i can relate to right now at this point and time.

This poem is really good!youb have an amazing talent!hope u wouldnt mind if i put you in my "add to favorites" great poem though!!

U hav such talent an incfredible poem, i no uv probably heard thbis in all your other comments but this poem is brill and i love it! *comment on mine!*

You are awesome! ... comment some of mine please

Thats really sweet!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

Aww thats so cute!!! (:

I love that poem.. I feel the same way about my boyfriend... That was really good.. Love it.. Read mine if u want

Beautiful poem, i like the way you put it together with the rhyming.

Thats excellent i love ur rhyming great job xox fallen

Gurl, you got yourself a winner. Hold on to him as tight as you can.

Silvershade
a.k.a. tanya
4 eva and 4 always