It was different, it was great, it was emotional, and it flowed!! i can see why its your fav of all yours! definately a read worth it! 5/5 no suggestions here!!

Another great poem keep up the good work 5/5 great job.

Well to tell you the truth. that what you said you wanted ..... well i think that nothing should be changed this poem in beautiful in itself. the words are powerful and deep i think it's amazing just the way it is 5.5

I would have to agree with XxTeArSxX17. Simply beautiful. :)

Take care.

xxx