Wow you def. have talent..love this. yeah it does kind of have the same feeling in it as my poem...thanks so much for your comment. I'll go read that other one now.
Christina

Im speachless.. its amazing

I know this might not be what it meant but this is how i took it i thought you might like to see what people get from your poems so from my interpretation they were in love and he killed himself sooo she killed herself as well and they were then happy......i might be completly off but thats how i took it lol which i think is very interesting

as for the flow and what not the flow was perfect the rhyme scheme was messy it looked like you were trying to rhyme at least but i couldnt tell for sure maybe you werent i dont know

5/5