Comments : Lysergia

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Wow. great!! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is one of the best poems i've read in a while. The rythm almost soundls like "wildly beating tribale drums" Did you mean to do that? Though it feels like the last line brakes up the beat a little. You are a truley great writter. You never came out and said anything bluntly. i admire that very much. my favorite line is "you're far but near, and its hardly clear, who could have forced this change?"

  • 18 years ago

    by Kara

    I love it! You an incredible writter keep it up!!!