Comments : Tortured memories

  • 12 years ago

    by Delo

    OMG lol u write about food :) your making me hungry and i'm already hungry now

    but nice written

  • 12 years ago

    by x..BeautyInTheBreakdown..x

    Amazing rytin... u captured perfectly how ard it is 2 eat that last jam tart even if u do treasure it!! lmao u mad ed!!! food obsessed comes 2 mind but its gd n e wayz!!
    luv,
    sarah
    xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaime

    Haha thats good-- I was about to complain that it was in the wrong category lol. Nicely written!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    Nicee.

  • 12 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    Seriously wot r u on??? calm urself darling! lol. i 4t u luved pies neways? idiot...

  • 12 years ago

    by Prettiest Zombie

    LMFAO

  • 12 years ago

    by poetals

    Lol, very good poem

  • 12 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Lmao

  • 12 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    AWW i love the wording in this, really meaningful! Great job!!! 5/5

    Ana*

  • 12 years ago

    by 69BabiiGurl69

    I really liked your poem,It was funny.I give you mad props...Uhh so yea I really liked it..Make another funny one!!Cuz ur good at it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Deathcanwait

    She ate ur jam tart? :| i got slightly confused but it was still rather gooood. nice job.

    Matt

  • 12 years ago

    by Laloser05

    LOL!!!!..... very funny :D
    :)Smile:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mallory Vn

    Ahh i love it, i never knew these sorts a poems could crack me up like they are.. keep it going.. part 2 part 2..

  • 12 years ago

    by Greedy

    Hahahahaha! I loved your poem! I know how you feel about eating your last jam tart..lol. I love your poems!

  • 12 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    LMFAO......... good poem I liked it

  • 12 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    Lol sorry ryan luv u really x x x

  • 12 years ago

    by JLT

    Roflmao! Nice! It's great. lol omg, where do you come up with this stuff? I love it lol. Keep it up babe *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 12 years ago

    by Vicky

    Lol dat was a gud poem! lol it is hard 2 eat the last jam tart init? i no how u feel. i reely like dat poem lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayleen

    Very good it made my mum read it again lol

  • 12 years ago

    by sinister

    K..........., well............... i really dont know what else to say.