Comments : Artificial is the New Real...

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Ahh,.. that was great.. i loved the flow and the message was real, entwined with beautiful visions.. this was great.. honestly.. i wish i could write like that.. pZ out 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    I totally agree with you...not that things will ever change..well maybe some day when the end of the world comes. theres just so much media..and so much perfection being expressed through it. looking at magizines these days is really depressing. great message through this poem. I really like it. n thanks so much for your comment.
    Christina

  • Deeply Written, Great Choice Of Wording And Formation, Fluid Flow, Precise Point, Enjoyable To Read 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    I agree we are who we are even if we sucuumb to plastic surgery underneath you are still the person you were and ur friends and families wont forget the real you

  • 18 years ago

    by pirateRAWRR

    LOved it this pOem is really awsum. Great stuff with a Great msG that really needs tO Get Out. a pOem which many yOunG gurls shOuld read. really well written keep up the Great wOrk! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    Hey.that is a !great! poem.so true.so many girls try to look like the girls in all of the magazines.
    i loved it.keep up the good work.
    Tes

  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    I loved the messege your trying to send out...all girls should read this!
    xxxx