Comments : Inside is dying

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    OMG i love this soo much.. im not even kidding.. out of all urs this is my favorite.. AWESOME job.. this ROCKS!

  • 18 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    OMG!!!!! i love this one...its the best one you've written...=] good job...keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    That poem is really GREAT & AMAZING i really loved it..
    because every thing in it is so real that even if you are smiling & laughing that doesn't mean that you are happy from inside, & thanks for writin this poem coz its really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by keith

    Wow

  • 17 years ago

    by Bri

    Oooo wow that was really good. That was the first one of you're poems that i read and it was very powerful the way it builds up at the end....very impressed

    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Carly

    After i read that all i could think of is wow. hah i actually said it aloud.

    "people cant guess
    no body knows
    that the inside is dying
    but nothing shows"

    i like that. and i bet just about everyone
    in the world can connect to this poem,
    especialy those last words.

    really good =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    This is excellent! I love it. You can really feel the emotion coming through when you write/read this. Amazing poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Ahh. i like this one.
    enjoyed read this a lot.

    emptyeyes...