Comments : Dear Daddy

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    GREAT JOB !!!!

    i love that!!

    its so good !!

    i have poems about my dad
    I FEEL UE PAIN !!
    5?%

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    5/5 ***

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    THANK YOU

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥*Jodie*♥

    Family realtionships/breakups are a very senstive poems and can be very depressing. howver i feel that even tho this poem is sad you have put abit of humour init towards the end mayb to say that even tho he has left u are still goin to carry on. i think that was a really good technique and you really do deserve this poem toi be awarded. u really are a good poet :)

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    I love how you stood up for not only yourself but for your mom as well. i like the way you write