Comments : She closes her eyes and i die

  • 18 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    God damn! that was brilliant and really original. I love the way this is written (altho' if you want my honest opinion the rhythm isnt quite perfect) in such a way so as you dont know what the meaning behind the poem is because there's just so many things it could stand for. I love reading inspiring pieces like this, it gives me what I need to keep writing. Well done,
    xXxForesakenxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexi

    Omg man, frikin gud poem...it's short, but beautiful...keep up the good work...

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Short but powerful
    i rewally really liked it!
    there was really good rhyming adn flowed well
    great job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Its awesome
    i liked it
    maybe u could read my poems now !!!

    thank

  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    Wow that was amazing.
    you are one hell of a writer.
    There are honestly no words to describe that poem.
    Pure brilliance.
    You should honestly get your poems published.
    alyssa

  • Aww Your Talking About Yourself, How Sad And Creative 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    :( that's really emotive - lovely piece. Thanks for your comment.

    emma x

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    OMG... such a great poem! you did a beautiful job. it was so... i cant find my wordz. i guess ill come back to you when i find them. lol *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    Love it! It's amazing, keep up the good work!