Beautiful write, very romantic....... loved it.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wow...I guess I don't really remember reading your poetry...or maybe your style has just changed...I'm adding you to my favorites so I can be on the look out for more...this was beautiful Amanda...I absolutely loved. You have some damn talent!!! :)

That was terrific Amanda i hope u keep writing and read some of mine if u want to

WTG excellent and critically truthfull of the beginning. Great work Amanda. (Matt)

Wow! ok i know this must be a personal poem but...i'm very nosy. is this your wedding night?

Omg that is so good

Wow... that was amazing!!! so sensual and full of passion. absolutely amazing! keep it up.
-xXx-

This is such a mixture of Comic and Love poetry!
As you meet him in the bedroom
Remember to reticently bat your eyes
Then throw him a seductive smile
Watch as he’s taken by surprise
great write!

~Anthony

I think I saw this poem in Sunny's weekly poetry contest.

I'm sure you'll beat my pathetci poem with this lovely love poem.

Well done M'Dear.

No complaints here.

I geart your description of every girls' general idea of a perfect wedding.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

How did I miss this one....this is one of the most beautiful pieces that I have read.....You are blessed with talent....absolutely breathtaking....Loved it....

Love Ann

Nicely written.

I Loved It....You Brought a Whole New Outlook On Wedding Bliss Altogether...Most Love Poems Describe The Wedding...But Never What Happens After It All...And You've Done Such a Great Job Of Displaying The Happiness And Excitement That Comes After The "I Do's"

All you’ll hear is the sound of passion
As your bodies interlace
As you both make your way to ecstasy
Pause to look upon his face

For you’ll be sure to see the love there
And his faithful pledge will be in sight
For your future holds so much promise
Beginning with your wedding night
^^ Simply Beautiful

5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo