A Poem not about food but about how people hate my poems

by YEeEeE HaW   Aug 29, 2005


Nobody likes my poems
Everybodys hates them
Nobody likes my poems
Nobody even gets them

Everyone hates my work
Everyone makes me feel bad
Everybody makes fun of my poems
that makes me very sad

I'm the worst rated person,
On the entire web site
Everyone hates my poems
which i strive over all night

Theres this girl named leah
who said my poems were wack
Well guess what honey child
Its my time to bite back

You people say you hate it
when people make fun of you
well did it ever occor to you hypocrites,
I GOT FEELINGS TO!!!

And i can't take this crap
all the junk you throwin at me
You poser monkeys that think there all that
and think that your above me

well im fed up with your cruel words
And your friggin crap
SO TO ALL YOU FAGOT RETARDS
I HOPE LAVA FALLS ON YOUR LAPS

And no, i aint the best rhymer
and my poems are kinda wild
and you peeps that say "she's not really 97"
WELL DUH IM JUST A CHILD

A child thats really angry
With all you hypocrites
"I hate when people make fun of me"
All the people who said that, BULL !@#$

You may think you know everything
from the heavens to the sea
You may know alot of things
BUT YOU MOST CERTAINLY KNOW ME!

A Janean Original

Dedicated to all the people who said crap about my poems in the comments. Except muffinman because that would be me. I set this account up to see how many people would say something other than "constructive critasism" and "your poems suck" is definately not that. and someone said this " i hate when people make fun of me because im differant and my piercings" on the poetry club well duh just because this made-up account is differnt leaves you no right to make fun of me.

YoUr WhAtEvEr
JaNeAn

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  • 11 years ago

    by ♥?♥

    I LIKE YO POEMS..
    HEHE..
    NICE POEM THO

  • 11 years ago

    by YEeEeE HaW

    Its ok, i thought it was funny. Stuff like that really doesnt really offend me. When i read these poems after i right them i think the same thing.(in case u were wonderin how i did it on my other poems is just bang the keyboard and do spell check and make sentences. I like my nonsense poems (not this one, this one accually makes sense) because they make people laugh or in case of some people, make them fustrated at the world for being so idiotic. Im sorry but ya'll guys are gullible. Nobody is that stupid to right poems like that.except me

    Ur WhAtEvEr,
    JaNeAn

  • 12 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    Wow i really liked that. it was great i didnt think it was bad at all. dont listen to others cause it dont really matter what they say like my great grandma use to tell me and now i tell others. as long as u try ur best and put ur heart in to it. then its good. even if it is just a bunch of words thrown together. anyways lota of luv and huggs and keep up the good work....luv ya missy

  • 12 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wohoo!!
    great poem u have
    i cant believe people said that
    i mean i checked out ur poem frm the discussions and u rele great!!
    dunt give a damn about what those peeps say.. they just most prolly have nth better to do.. lol
    keep up ur good work
    ur in my favs hunn =)
    peace!

  • 12 years ago

    by HεartxOfxGlass

    I LIKE THAT...I THINK YOU CAN RHYME...DON'T LISTEN TO THOSE PEOPLE.. THEY JUST WISH THEY COULD RHYME LIKE YOU...