I love the twist at the end...you have an awesome writing style, definitely keep it up. nice flow and description, 5/5

take care
Sara

That was gorgeous
you have talent i loved it
props

Great poem. I really liked it.

*Blood Shot Eyes*

Okay...I must say that poem had me laughing @the end....So sweet...You can really rhyme...(thinks that how you spell it)..lol....Graet Job!!!!!5/5

Okay...I must say that poem had me laughing @the end....So sweet...You can really rhyme...(thinks that how you spell it)..lol....Graet Job!!!!!5/5

Hey...you had me thinking it was a dream too. I'm kinda glad it wasn't. I guess I'm a hopeless romantic. I love happy endings. Anyway, well done. I give a 5... not that you really needed it. Keep up the work, I'll be reading it...

Hey ur poem was great i just started coming to this website and urs was the first one i read! and i loved it keep up the great work!

I like it good job

I love it its amaizing. keep up the gud work. xxx

That is a great poem i LOVE it i gae you a 5 keep it up you have talent sweetie
much love
always alana

Aww that wOz really sweet, lOved the twist at the end keep up the Great wOrk =]

Wow very good poem i love ur style of writing! keep it up id love to read more

Omg tht is sooooooooo sweet
*~*emma*~*

Wow boi that was such a gud poem it gave mi shiverz ur truly talented keep up tha gud work

That was really good. i loved it. your a really great writer. keep it up

5/5

Really nice poem man wow it made me feel like i wish i had one those nights keep it the good work.

That was excelent i loved it man keep up the good work 5/5

Very cute - I really enjoyed this piece well written and very sweet. Keep up the great work 5/5
Eirisa xxoo

Omg that poem is so sweet it litterally made me cry

AWWW this is so freaking good!!! Wow I love the way this poem was written none of the rhyme was forced into it. Keep up the great work because this is totally awsome.
Always believe in love and trust in God!!