Comments : Axis of Intoxication

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Spinning on the axis of intoxication
    its spreading the decay of imagination
    ask; why not surrender to the isolation
    there is no need to feel this obligation
    Ilike that! very imaginative!
    This is very strong, and i understand the subject, and the element, but it still seems rather vauge. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    This is an excellent poem. well writin and well put together. is it based on events from your life, or where did the ideas from this poem come from?
    ~Hard2Heal

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    The title in itself deserves a 5/5 you know how to put the right words together and make them sound super cool i loved the idea of the poem im just assuming its about drugs unless its some metaphor but i know alot of drug addicts and its a scary thing so if this was you at a point im sorry but i think that this is a great topic to write about and as it is common you made it unique great job