Hey! very well written! it was awesome and the flow was really good! so i can see what you're tryin to say! 5/5 for usre!

Really good job...i really enjoyed it...you are a wonderful poet...5/5 thanx for the comments on my poem i really appreciate it...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Well that one kind of strayed at the end and didn't tie together too well, its till brilliant, absolutely brilliant, but odd

Please check out my new poem Overcoming and i just wanted to say you are very inspiring you proved to me how childish my work is and since i am overcoming my depression i thought i would write about my feelings well tell me what you think good, bad, terrible, great?

Wow, i really like this one. I particularly liked the last stanza. I personaly feel like sometimes it doesnt matter if you know what you mean in your writes, but if you can feel what you mean than thats all that matters. idk, just my thoughts no need to take them seriously unless you'd like too. :-) ~Hard2Heal

I love this. ~ you have a great way of writing its all fun and exciting - that wasn't supposed to rhyme lol but yea you did a good job on this one, its great.