Comments : Second Chance

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    I love it!!!!!!!!! i love this poem sooo much!!! good really good!! i will give u a 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow, that was great! I admire your writting skills so much. You put a bad thing and make it so that people understand their actions. You are truely the best writter here. (In my opinion anyways) And you are totally right, commiting suicide isnt the right thing to do. Nice Job Pal!

    -Your Spanking Partner, Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by trudy

    This is really touching you have worded it so good ur right thats not the way to die you really could learn something from your poems keep going with them keep giving people advice like this and you could be a councilor i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    Damn this poem tight. I understand what your sayin to. Keep up the good work. 5/5.
    ~J.T.~

  • 18 years ago

    by ambika

    Besutiful poem Saint

    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephie

    I think this is an ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL poem honey!!! truly one of the best poems i've ever read! very touching. totally loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This is absolutely gorgeous! Though...I hope it's not true, life is precious! May God bless you and keep you always!

    Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This is great, Its a diffrent type of love poem and its a story also.
    The flow was great and I loved the idea, so original and unique.
    Well done this is excellent.

    xD

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Wow loved it...love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by James Brady

    This is really beautiful
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by michelle

    This braught tears to my eyes. i had a similar situation.. Keep writing. Your great at it..

  • 17 years ago

    by Lizzy Romero

    This is great. it really shows what you can do with a second chance