Comments : My field of dreams

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    This was such a beautiful and peaceful poem! You painted such a wonderful picture of nature, and I know I have a field of dreams! I have a new job so I don’t have as much time on the site as I used to, so I am a bit behind on my reading! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh yes, I believe we all have our field of dreams......... beautiful write

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    This was nice flowing, and a nice sentiment, good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a very soothing poem. Absolutely fantastic!

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    Wow this is beautiful! you've given me the inspiration to write about my field of dreams...terrific write..I enjoyed reading this piece. keep up the good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    Simply beautiful. I loved it.
    you're so talented shelby.
    thank you so much for your comment.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    That was just brilliant its so true we all have that place we can escape to, really well put together thanks for the comment!

    take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    I like the whole general idea of this poem.

    "I could smile the flowers"

    I think you meant "smell". =)

    "I could hear running water
    of a brook not far away"

    For some reason this part of the poem pulls the whole idea together.

    I can actually imagine the sound of running water, very nice M'Dear.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 11 years ago

    by Marjan

    Very imaginative and beautifully written. one of the best poems
    I have read recentley.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Such a peaceful and beautiful write...Enjoyed...I love your talent...

    Love Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    This poem is so easy to imagine. very creative and it brings the reader happiness. such joy and easyness in this poem. relaxing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marjan

    Wow, I think you described the place beautifully. that really sounded like a dreamy place. It was as if I was there.
    yeah, I agree. I think everyone has their own field of dreams.
    much love,
    marjan