Comments : Sunshine On My Heart (Written by Peter DeJesse & Ann)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ann, I commented in the club but I will again! You and Peter did such a fabulous job on this! I feel that way about someone, but not a lover, my big sis Eirisa, I look to her as my sunshine because she came in my life when I needed her to. You guys are great writers and this peice was great I don't know what else to say!
    With Love,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Ann & Pete, this was truly a lovely poem written by the both of you, and I keep coming back to read it again and again. Truly enjoyable to read.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful piece Ann, you and Peter did a wonderful job..........

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • Aww.that is so so sweet..AMAZING!! no words can explain..so filled with emotion.. great job..5/5..
    Crystal

  • 12 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Your poem was beautiful you two have so much talent you should continue working together!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey hunny, i thought it was such a beautiful poem to write. I absolutely loved it. You inspire me because i think you are a great person and can write about many things with no problem. Hugs to you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by **Stary_nights**

    Hello ann~ this is vey good, i really enjoyed it!! take care, love ya~
    -Britt

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    So are you and Peter a couple? or just writing together?

    That is really an excellent poem. It flowed wonderfully and so emotional... Nicely done...collaborations are so much fun...I recently did one with a friend as well...

    Nice write you two....you guys should be very proud of this one!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Natalie,
    Peter and I are friends, in the same poetry club and we were teamed up as partners. He's Angela's love... glad you liked it...
    hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great job! Nothing much more to say. Just a great wonderful amazing stunning job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Erin

    That was a very beautiful work. I can relate to it very well at this moment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    It's so beautiful Ann, just Like your heart :D
    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 12 years ago

    by *~*Gina*~*

    That was a beautiful Poem. It was sooo good!!
    ~Smile Always~
    Gina

  • 12 years ago

    by Grace

    This was a wonderful poem! I really would like to see more of your work with peter.

  • 12 years ago

    by waiting4U2Bmine

    It was a very touching poem.. You two did a wonderful job

  • 12 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    WOW.

  • 12 years ago

    by Void

    Good job i really liked it, it was long but well worth the read. I hope to see you around here more :)