Wonderfully done my friend. Though i do agree the last stanza seems to just stop the poem dead rather than leaving a bit to the readers imagination. Though i grasp the whole concept; and i loved the theme of this poem. I hate those musty 30degree days that burn you to a crisp and choke you.
Lol, anyway sweetie lovely write; can't wait to read more now that i'm home a bit more often.

Take care always hun,
Luvooo heappppssss.

xx Kal.