You and ME

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Sep 6, 2005


I can't believe you
You said we would always be
But now your gone
Y Te olvidaste DE mi

I can't force you
To be with me
But i can try to
Just be me

I give up now
That your with her
I just have to learn The truth
It just wasn't meant to be

I hope your happy
Because since the day you turned
and walked away
what u don't realize is that
you threw my life away

I used to look into your eyes
and feel you were the one
but now I'm sitting here
with these emotions so strong

I promise you will never
find another girl like me
but baby when you do
we will be forever through

they say the one in love
is always the last to know
but you won't know only
because i won't let it show

the tears i cry
only i can hear
but the ones you cry
are almost never near

so this is my good-bye
for ever and ever
I'll see you in my dreams
because that seems to last forever

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  • 18 years ago

    by SexMeister69

    No matter what they say, this poem is perfect. You should maybe capitalise the "i's" but stil WOWWWW! We can all relate to this! What a poet! I envy ur talent~!

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    Couldnt really get into the flow, and at points i thought i was reading the same verse over again, due to the fact that a lot of your rhyming words are the same in each verse

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Awww hun, i can so relate to this too, were all going through some things in life& love and it is hard sometimes to get by but poetry can help us all in the future I guess, you did a great job with this really emotional hun you have talent keep it up & thank you for that touching comment on my poem i really appreciate it. lubb you

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    I was kinda gettin mixed signals on that one, but i gez thats coz im reli sleepy and its almost 12 am in this part of the world:P.. overalll, i lykd this poem, and its words and rhyming...
    gr8 goin
    take care
    nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Love the last 4 lines keep up the amzing owrk your really good and you have a nice flow to
    5.5

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