It was a good poem but the last line in first paragraph i dont understand but the rest is very good

I like it

I like it

I love it, it's really nice but sad...Do you speak spanish? Cause I do.

Aw...so touching....i dont like the second stanza...you rhymed me...w/...me! that just dont work ....5/5 n/e how b/c it was an awsome poem

Yo n3na i luv this poem!!!
i can really relate 2 it 2
5/5
*i love u*

Okay this wasnt your best it was very unsteady with the flow and this stanza

I promise you will never
find another girl like me
but baby when you do
we will be forever through

completly contradicts intself first your saying you wont ever find someone like me and then your all when you do well be over...opposite oppinions yeah

i loved that you used a different language im going to go try it now haha your maazing though you definatly are being put on my favorites list great job 5/5

*Wipes her eyes* This poem is like the best one. I Love it, just love it.
If you ever want to talk to me feel free to email me or anything.

Love the last 4 lines keep up the amzing owrk your really good and you have a nice flow to
5.5

I was kinda gettin mixed signals on that one, but i gez thats coz im reli sleepy and its almost 12 am in this part of the world:P.. overalll, i lykd this poem, and its words and rhyming...
gr8 goin
take care
nannoush

Awww hun, i can so relate to this too, were all going through some things in life& love and it is hard sometimes to get by but poetry can help us all in the future I guess, you did a great job with this really emotional hun you have talent keep it up & thank you for that touching comment on my poem i really appreciate it. lubb you

Couldnt really get into the flow, and at points i thought i was reading the same verse over again, due to the fact that a lot of your rhyming words are the same in each verse

No matter what they say, this poem is perfect. You should maybe capitalise the "i's" but stil WOWWWW! We can all relate to this! What a poet! I envy ur talent~!