Hey this poem was amazing, u hav a real talent there so never stop. i think you could give anne rice a run for her money, i'm waiting for some of your work in hardback soon.

keep ritin

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This is an amazing story inside the poem. Man I'm really impressed, everything worked together so perfect.
I really can't even put down in words how good I think it really is.

Woah this is wicked good! I love the ending. Deffently going on my fav. list. Could you maybe check out my poem "The Call" ? 5/5