My sorrow

by Katelyn   Sep 11, 2005


All the pain and sorrow he put me through.
all the scars i have just from him.
there isn't even a number that could tell how many times i cried!
all those times he said he loved me were just a waste!
why isn't anyone here to comfort me?
they all think that i hurt him.
it's not true!
you would be able to tell if you
could see my scars!
all the times i laugh at his jokes
were all a big waste!
all the time i spent crying,
did nothing!
never mind this is a waste of my time!
he's not worth it!
i won't give in again!
he has always did this,
he manipulates people like that!
i won't give up my life for his!
that's a promise i made to myself!
i won't do it i hate him!
he's a low life!
so why do i care?
i won't let my heart be sore anymore.
pff he's not worth the blood!
he was trash before i came in his life!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashton

    I lik it alot it is really good
    kep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    Really emotional and describes all the actions of the guy. Great adjectives and examples of what happens.

  • 18 years ago

    by SethM

    I feel your pain and sorrow. You have the right to feel that way, but your just too drastic. I think you should try to think of something other than boys or cutting yourself when you write your poems. Make up an experience to write about completly forget your life when you write. It may be your poem, your work, and your soul on the page, but I think from reading your poems that you could make up a story of a happily married couple, or a couple that just broke up and want to get back together but they think that it would be a bad idea. You know, those are just a few ideas that I think you could make work, or you could continue doing what you currently do, i guess it works for you. Just my oppinion.

    Without Wax,
    Seth

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