HAHAHAHAHAHA I love it!! HAHAHAHAHAHA I'm laughing uncontrolably... LMFAO Yes, it's true. They joing and they post and beg for reviews...they don't read the guide lines. I will admit I didn't at first either but at the same time I never put those lame little comments in my titles...but eventually I read the blasted rules....there should be a test you have to take before you enter the site just so it's SURE that new member have read the rules...LMAO That would work right?
Well I hope all is well is your world!! Take Care...I heart this poem!! LMAO BYE BYE
I really don't know why you didn't put this under humour. This is the honest truth, and the truth is funny. Take everyone's advice and post this in the guidelines/rules !!.. You make a very good point!.. It's too bad those kids aren't listening. Keep it up.
Of any of my while
That doesn't go well with title. if it was tile, it would, so i think you should fiddle with it more.
For one, it's your problem
For not being involved in the community
Of the Poems and Quotes family
As if you've bulit an immunity
that's a nice segment, it makes me feel all warm inside;)
Wipe the tears and snot from your faces
HAHAHAHA!!! I love that!
you're quite blunt, but i suppose you need to be sometimes, nice job with this, it's pretty humorous to me. I did that once, but I had said (THIS REALLY HAPPENED!!) and I thought that would pass, but it didn't, so lol, I guess i'm an idiot too. i love this, 5/5
Couldn't have said it better myself. I avoid those poems with "Please vote & read" etc .. If the person can't comply with the rules of this site then my time will be spent reading someones work worthy. Congrats on this, vividly appeasing to people like me who detest those attention seeking jipp0s.
To me this piece seemed to have such emotion in it, and its hard to capture that on a subject like this.. it's certainly not a typical subject to write about, yet you made in the form of a poem.. that in and of itself shows the quality of this.. its a good poem, within the realm of this site.. meaning someone not knowing the way this community is, couldnt really relate, and would be disinterested,.. with that being said i think this was proven to make a point, and that it did, powerfully. no real criticisms here,.. weird one to work with,.. but ur structure was pretty tight, flow pretty much impeccable, and the emotion was felt. anyway good job,.. i couldnt write something this well about such an arbitrary subject..
You took the words right out of my mouth, i couldnt have said it any better! I am new here and i read the guidelines and then read some poems and i was wondering if any of those people read the guidelines or not.
good for you!