Baby, I Look Like An Error, Stop Lying.

by Not Bulletproof   Sep 11, 2005


You say I am something pretty,
Something special in your eyes.
Well, tell me just what you see,
So I can tell you that it's all lies.

What's so interesting about me?
Since you say something's there.
Where is this wonderful beauty,
That makes all my essence blare?

I don't see the things you see,
My mind comprehends the lies.
It is my instinct, this negativity,
Agree, you say? I won't comply.

You say I'm something so fancy,
Something unique in many ways.
I look in a mirror; stare down me,
And I see nothing you see today.

I see nothing amazing or lovely,
Nothing that you have said, at all.
Staring into my hazel eyes to see,
But I see nothing but a stone wall.

I am not sure what it is, exactly,
That you are talking about now.
You're clearly not talking of me,
I will never be like that, anyhow.

You say I'm something so dearly,
Something that is clearly so rare.
But I see the same girl beside me,
And same as every girl out there.

Stop lying to save my heart, baby,
I know that I look just like an error.
There's no need to say love to me,
You can't save me from the terror.

I already know the truth.

Sarah Gammon ©
09/11/05

Thanks for reading. -xxx-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Excellent x

  • 18 years ago

    by BEAUTiFUL JESiCA

    WOW!!! thats is amanzily beautiful! man! the way you write express your iner soul..
    you must be beautiful~ keep your head up~

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel Sanctuary ©

    Lol All the people that commented... Gotta know you're wrong now. ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good...but im sure that he thinkz that...cuz hez sayin it and u've gotten be something to him! don't be so hard on urself...everyonez got sumthin in them...im sure you got lotz! u sure do have talent! keep it up and take care, im sure lotz of ppl have experienced this..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    This was awesome i loved it 5/5