WOW.... that was great.... i was disappointed to see that you deleted all of your work.... they were amazing.... anyways i really connected with this poem.... its just like me all over..... but anyways girl.... this was really mad.... and please start posting again... and once again mad work....

Crystal.....

Nice job. ur back and yay. i think ur poems are amazing and great nice job keep it up 5/5

Sarah's a lier. I'm most positive what ever your love is saying to you is true. You're just never looking for positives. Love you, you're everything he says and probably more. Take Care

Angel

Lovely poem, elegantly written ,keep up the excellent work
tw quiero mucho
katie
(no, hahha, i'm not mexican)

Have you ever stop and thought that an error can be beautiful? Especially when they realize themselves and are fighting what they've become. and that's when they are no longer an error. When they decide to pick themselves up and brush themselves off, thats when an error becomes beautiful. I don't know much about your past, and I don't know much about your present, either, but I DO know that you are the strongest person I know. theres no doubt in my mind that you can get through anything. You are beautiful to me Sarah, no matter what this life has done to you. Don't give up, will you stay beautiful for me? I love you.

Take Care,
Renee

Amazing ...

I love ur poem u did a good job i feel the same way hope 2 read more

Wow, totally know how u feel that is amazing, keep up the wonderful work

Wow fantastic work... i can relate to this poem... it's very amazing and i really enjoyed reading it... great job and don't stop writing!!!
-take care
-BrokenSmile

That was a great poem. i know exactly what you're talking about. keep writing. you got good stuff

Excellent poem.

*Blood shot eyes*

This was awesome i loved it 5/5

Hey, this is really good...but im sure that he thinkz that...cuz hez sayin it and u've gotten be something to him! don't be so hard on urself...everyonez got sumthin in them...im sure you got lotz! u sure do have talent! keep it up and take care, im sure lotz of ppl have experienced this..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Lol All the people that commented... Gotta know you're wrong now. ^^

WOW!!! thats is amanzily beautiful! man! the way you write express your iner soul..
you must be beautiful~ keep your head up~

Excellent x