Always

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Sep 12, 2005


What do you think i feel
when i look into your eyes
why do you think i choose you
over all those other guys

you are the one that knows how to love me
i give my heart to you
don't you think i still want to be with u
after all we've been thru?

you promised me love
you promised me honesty
but in the end all you did
was deceive me honey

i want to be with you forever
until the end of time
but nobody seems to notice
that our love doesn't rhyme

I'll give you the earth
I'll give you the skies
just so you won't
say good-bye

but until then my love
i have nothing to do
but warn you that my love for you
will always be true

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kacey Lynne

    I beginning tol love all your poems i like them all so far

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    I have to say in agrrement with the other comments that

    "I'll give you the earth
    I'll give you the skies
    just so you won't
    say good-bye"

    is such a beautiful verse

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. that was reli gud.. i especially lykd the part wer u said:
    i want to be with you forever
    until the end of time
    but nobody seems to notice
    that our love doesn't rhyme

    I'll give you the earth
    I'll give you the skies
    just so you won't
    say good-bye

    reli gr8.. i enjoyed it :D
    thumbs up
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Awww you seem to really love this guy i really hope he knows how you feel nice poem love the flow .55

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Not sure if I commented on this one. Anyway, this poem flows very well, I love your love poems! There so..so..they just rock. ;)

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