It's really sweet, keep writing.

Hey I like this poem a lot it kinda reminds me of me. Thanx for commetin on my poem. Much love Chica.

Aw this is so sweet ...5/5 always good to have some1 to love

This was a very good poem. The title, too, was appropriate. I like the diction a lot. I only dislike the stanza which contains a lot of random signs, but that is not your fault. Very good indeed!

Aw, again this is sweet.. i can relate to it, 5/5

I can really relate to this poem, it's very good and so sweet, keep up the good work
take care xxxxxx
p.s fanks for the comment on my poem xxxxx

Jeeze i dont think i have to read any more of yours haha they all are so good 5/5 AGAIN lol
Becky

Hey chik,
i luv all yo poemzzz,
das y i gave u 5/5
thanks 4 all thecomments on minez 2!
luv ya!!!

Ahh your wonderful you write about the exact same idea over and over and over but i still like each poem you write your a very talented lady some part of this poem were choppy like this one
I'll give you the earth
I'll give you the skies
just so you won't
say good-bye
but other then that this was incredible 5/5

Not sure if I commented on this one. Anyway, this poem flows very well, I love your love poems! There so..so..they just rock. ;)

Awww you seem to really love this guy i really hope he knows how you feel nice poem love the flow .55

Wow.. that was reli gud.. i especially lykd the part wer u said:
i want to be with you forever
until the end of time
but nobody seems to notice
that our love doesn't rhyme

I'll give you the earth
I'll give you the skies
just so you won't
say good-bye

reli gr8.. i enjoyed it :D
thumbs up
Nannoush

I have to say in agrrement with the other comments that

"I'll give you the earth
I'll give you the skies
just so you won't
say good-bye"

is such a beautiful verse

I beginning tol love all your poems i like them all so far